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Aug 20, 2024
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Revelations in my Tuesday lecture
Perhaps there is no such thing as soulmates
And fate doesn't exist
Maybe we are simply people who get along
Two individuals that enjoy each others company
Perhaps life would be wasted waiting for the perfect one
Maybe you just have to pick someone and start living
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I'm experimenting with poems that don't rhyme. I don't really know what I'm doing.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 year 1 month ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
This poem explores the concept of soulmates and fate in a thought-provoking way. The use of uncertainty and questioning in the lines creates a sense of introspection and contemplation. The contrast between the idea of soulmates and the practicality of choosing someone to start living with is effectively highlighted. Consider further developing the imagery or adding more vivid descriptions to enhance the emotional impact of the poem. Additionally, you may want to explore different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes to deepen the layers of meaning in your work.
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Leslie
1 year 1 month ago
Avelina
This is good sound advice! I loved it. If you don't mind leave a comment on mine.
Candlewitch
1 year 1 month ago
Hello Avelina,
good work...keep on experimenting, it can only make your poetry better. It is very nice to meet you, welcome to Neopoet!
*hugs, Cat
Obadiah Grey
1 year 1 month ago
Hey, I'm with you on the
Hey, I'm with you on the revelations !!
The phrase "Bobbing for apples" springs to mind,
(pssst, no-one really knows what the fuck is going on!)
nice start,,,,,, Obi.
Lavender
1 year 1 month ago
Revelations In My Tuesday Lecture
Hello, Avelina,
Yes! "Perhaps" to all the mentioned revelations! I can't help but wonder what the topic of the Tuesday lecture was, and it doesn't really matter, but I found myself sitting there, too.
Thank you!
Lavender
Avelina
1 year 1 month ago
Thanks <3
Haha it was a math lecture, no wonder I found myself daydreaming!
Thanks,
Avelina
Leslie
1 year 1 month ago
Avelina
I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM
Leslie
1 year 1 month ago
Avelina
I COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH YOU REVELATION. I DON'T BELIEVE IN SOULMATES. HOWEVER I THINK THAT YOUR APPROACH TO WRITING POETRY IS A GOOD ONE AND I LIKE THIS POEM