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Depressed 1
Depressed 1
Dec 08, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Ride

I hear the sound of your distant tears falling

I can feel your broken heart as it is calling

I jump onto my trusty horse, and I ride

I long to be back again by your loving side

I want to feel once again your soft lips

Feel my arms around your curving hips

Rain nor beast can slow my horse down

As I ride through dark forests and towns

When I reach you, we will never part again

As we love our love that has no end

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A little fantasy poem I wrote

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southwest United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Jim Morrison, Sylvia Plath

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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

It sounds...

as though a princess is calling you! I'm sure that you would be her knight in shining armor! ~ Geez.
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Depressed 1

Depressed 1

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Geezer. Like most of my life it is pure, or is it un-pure? fantasy.

Alex Tanner

Alex Tanner

2 years 7 months ago

The Ride

Love this. It's my type of Poem. Flows easy from the heart.

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 7 months ago

Good job

I like all your stuff. This on especially speaks to me. My wife and I are pretty hopelessly co dependent on each other. Sometimes just going to work and and being apart for the day seems like forever. I also never want to leave, and when I do I feel like I’m battling my way back to some safe place against the nape of her neck under the aroma of her hair. I feel this. Deeply.

Tim

Depressed 1

Depressed 1

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Tim I am glad you could relate to it.