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THE RIGHT WRONG MAN

For far too long we've had just hacks
and Obama likely was the worst
placing undue burdens on our backs.
Government morphed into a curse.

Now invaders infiltrate the south
and ANTIFA is running wild
spewing hatred from a masked mouth.
Leftists pitch fits like some spoiled child.

Too many leeches on the dole
living off working people's toil.
Socialism's emerged from its hole.
Freedom wilts in poisoned soil.

Judges decide they should make the laws
along with unelected bureaucrats
so we've become trapped without good cause
and treated worse than gutter rats.

But there's a thing about us, don't you know?
We produce leaders when in a bad plight
who banish weeds that won't let freedom grow.
Perhaps such a one is now in sight.

We have a far from perfect man.
One not from the political class.
a guy who reminds us that we CAN
retake our land and kick some ass.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For all those who can't find a single good thing to say about this wrong man

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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chevyvent

chevyvent

6 years 11 months ago

structured quite well

Fresh verses you have one example is , "Judges decide they should make laws
along with appointed bureaucrats
so we've become trapped without good cause"

The entire piece was structured quite well I'm interested in reading more of your works.

lovedly

lovedly

6 years 11 months ago

nice the western world

is now in business wrought
but then asses
at what labour cost
that's why I composed

WORLD Peace
u didn't read
the piece

S

scribbler

6 years 11 months ago

jeez loved

You just won't cut me any slack lol. OK, OK I'll try to get to your poem tomorrow .......stan