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THE RIGHT WRONG MAN
For far too long we've had just hacks
and Obama likely was the worst
placing undue burdens on our backs.
Government morphed into a curse.
Now invaders infiltrate the south
and ANTIFA is running wild
spewing hatred from a masked mouth.
Leftists pitch fits like some spoiled child.
Too many leeches on the dole
living off working people's toil.
Socialism's emerged from its hole.
Freedom wilts in poisoned soil.
Judges decide they should make the laws
along with unelected bureaucrats
so we've become trapped without good cause
and treated worse than gutter rats.
But there's a thing about us, don't you know?
We produce leaders when in a bad plight
who banish weeds that won't let freedom grow.
Perhaps such a one is now in sight.
We have a far from perfect man.
One not from the political class.
a guy who reminds us that we CAN
retake our land and kick some ass.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: For all those who can't find a single good thing to say about this wrong man
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
chevyvent
6 years 11 months ago
structured quite well
Fresh verses you have one example is , "Judges decide they should make laws
along with appointed bureaucrats
so we've become trapped without good cause"
The entire piece was structured quite well I'm interested in reading more of your works.
scribbler
6 years 11 months ago
Hi Mario
Thank you for your kind words......stan
lovedly
6 years 11 months ago
nice the western world
is now in business wrought
but then asses
at what labour cost
that's why I composed
WORLD Peace
u didn't read
the piece
scribbler
6 years 11 months ago
jeez loved
You just won't cut me any slack lol. OK, OK I'll try to get to your poem tomorrow .......stan