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Nov 05, 2022
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RISE TO FALL
and fall
it's FALL!
Sundays we arise
God yours not mine
sleeps
where in heaven
don't ask me
I have seen none
till yesterday
I passed across a street
the house builders shop
he displayed a billboard
''A nicely decorated house
fully artistically furnished
lots of fruits on the dining table
HERE LIVES GOD
IN PEACE
'TIS PARADISE''
About This Poem
Last Few Words: STILL SEARCHING PARADISE ....AS THE DICE IS BEING CAST
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Rise To Fall
Hi, Lovedly,
Still searching for paradise. "Lots of fruits on the dining table." I guess paradise has different meanings for a lot of us. Lots to think about here...
L
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
Pardise
is outright
IMAGERY
NONE LIKE EARTH
YET found anywhere
by anyone
in HOPES
we ALL live
Ma'am Lav
glad you alone read me