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May 19, 2015
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rising glory
exquisite,
yes
not painful
but beautiful
you extract elixir of life
from the thoughts of a dying man
since ages as we are all born to die
one day
some day
since we arrive
but when shall the train arrive
at the platform of demise
none know yet
nor ever will
tis my surmise
man still till his last day wants to rise
and
once he does
tis no surprise
we all love to see ours rise....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 1 month ago
Hi loved
glad to see that you have decided to join the contest. loved the poem.
Alid
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
u get the
credit for this friend tc
judyanne
10 years 1 month ago
actually gave me a chuckle
But a bit rude, if I read it correctly.... or is it just my mind loved?
:)
Good luck in the contest, great to see you participating.
love judy
xxx
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
why rude judy
its joe's poetry
out of the horrors of existence
he is still emerging
isn't he?