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Jul 22, 2018
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Rogue State
What constitutes certified rogue nation?
When criminal leaders commit murder
Without any fear of repercussion
Tar victims as threats to social order
The judicial system will not assist
As subservient serfs dismiss what’s fact
When the victims’ kin in their claims persist
Servile stooges react as per their pact
However despite all their state power
The time of reckoning is drawing near
As victims’ kin bask in their winning hour
And the criminals face justice and fear
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
chevyvent
6 years 11 months ago
Very beautifully written
Very beautifully written makes you think of a sunset beach. Toward a renewal you have encountered very good meaning in piece. Let the words trickle down your mind through your thoughts. You made a decent stab at it very creative piece you got this very good. Thinking of a rainbow moment with words its a stretch of the imagination. Just some thoughts about this piece, True words true to life really beautiful in its form.
raj
6 years 11 months ago
Sunsets and rainbows??? Mario
Sunsets and rainbows??? Mario you must be joking...there are no rainbows after sun sets..please make sure your comments are in sync with the write
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OriginalRhyku
6 years 11 months ago
Mario
Thank you for your kind words.
I believe that the truth will set you free -words to ponder for those who deal in untruths and their low level serfs.
Roscoe Lane
6 years 11 months ago
Very good,
Very good and I only wish it were to come true. Regards Roscoe.....
OriginalRhyku
6 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Roscoe
Justice moves slowly but surely.