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Mar 12, 2021
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rolls of thunder
rolls of thunder,
hear my cry
drooping rain down
from the sky
crave escape,
crave release
i dream of the place
that is made of peace
speak for me,
let them know,
theres only so far that i can go
About This Poem
Last Few Words: this poem kinda just came up outta nowhere.. I started to cry and shortly after that, I hear thunder. My whole room's atmosphere changed. I'm trying not to make the poems too cheesy cause I feel like that's how all of my work has been. let me know what you think & thanks for reading <3
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
scribbler
4 years 3 months ago
welcome
A succinct poem . Read your poetry out loud. I pass this advice along as it has done wonders for my chicken scratchings