Romeo and Juiliette

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Romeo and Juiliette" captures the lingering emotions and nostalgia associated with a past relationship. The repetition of "I still miss you" and "Once in a while" creates a sense of longing and the desire to hold onto certain memories. The contrast between "I don't love you" and "I miss your smile" adds complexity to the speaker's feelings, suggesting a mix of conflicting emotions.

The poem effectively conveys a sense of yearning for the simplicity and innocence of childhood, when love was uncomplicated. The imagery of "an unopened lid" and "when love was only / An unopened lid" emphasizes the idea of untapped potential and the loss of that initial innocence.

The use of the Romeo and Juliet reference adds depth to the poem, highlighting the tragic nature of love and the passage of time. The final lines, "When we were two kids / Not Romeo and Juliette," serve as a reminder of the inevitable changes and challenges that

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Hello, Shelby,
This has the feel of a song. Much depth here, but also the naivete' of youth. Bittersweet memories.
Thank you,
L

I Particularly liked the last verse, I sometimes wish, as Bob Dylan Wrote, ''Ten thousand dollars at the drop of a hat, I'd give it all gladly if our lives could be just like that''. Excellent throughout. Alex.

I loved the rhythm of the words it was easy to read while keeping me interested in the subject of the poem