of roses

roses fade
yes...
but they never die...
they live in books
till end of time
and
help recall the moments
since lapsed,
instantly

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Country/Region: ROU

12 years 11 months ago

but i would lose the last lines
'as hands clap
they come alive in memory....
wow
how voluntarily'
- finish the write at 'instantly'

just me :)
love judy
xxx

12 years 11 months ago

since accomplished

12 years 11 months ago

Just the odd flower here in laminate but the old bible use to hold a few.
Good advise from Judy and a grand write,
Yours Ian.T

12 years 11 months ago

r d two roses for me
as u help spread my perfume
across the internet
thanks Judy and Ian

Judy always gives good advice
i also advise
you follow her 22222222

12 years 11 months ago

'''''''Of rose
roses fade
yes...
but they never die...
they live in books
till end of time
and
help recall the moments
since lapsed,
instantly…

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