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May 01, 2012
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Roses Are My Favorite Flower
Roses are my favorite flowers
The reds growing outside my school
is blooming so gracefully
behind the stone fence I sat on
The round silver globe of the world
Sits carefully in the front courtyard
Water sprinkling up from her pond
Sparkle like diamonds in the sun
I love this time of year
Springtime is in the air
When all that's dead in winter
spring back to life in spring
©barbara writes
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
13 years 2 months ago
Beautifully put Barbara, Tim
Beautifully put Barbara,
Tim
Barbara Writes
13 years 2 months ago
thanks Tim
Your commentary is appreciated