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Nov 28, 2012
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rosy blower
...
You are that Rose!
that many don't deserve
and when you leave their garden
to them abandon
then alone they will know
the loss of their loving Rose
you are gifted and wonderful,
too many other gardeners
would love to water you...
hope the message is taken
and well understood
many a planter then has cursed oneself
for not having praised and timely too
ere they strayed to plough
to greener pastures
they thought…..
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 7 months ago
Loved
Had a good read, the last part needs a conclusion it seems to have left things unresolved, as the last three lines.
I like the theme, Yours Ian.T
loved
12 years 7 months ago
LALALALAL i WAS AWAITING YOUR ADVICE
poets struggler's
rosy blower
a cross stick
seed of life TIME Still unseeded