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Apr 07, 2016
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This poem is part of the contest:
April 2016 - Limerick - Prize -$25 USD Amazon.com Gift Certificate Winner
The Royal Rush [Limerick]
The Queen had a touch of Flu
the King fed her a spicy stew
she turned bloody red
jumped out of her bed
then rushed to the palatial loo
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About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Keith Logan
9 years 2 months ago
Rush Indeed
This is what a limerick should be, humouros to fit the jaunty beat. I have seen elsewhere that limericks can be serious. Seriously? Let topic dictate rhythm and nowhere can my mind connect a solemn subject matter with a happy beat.
raj
9 years 2 months ago
Thanks Keith for your time,
Thanks Keith for your time, read and appreciative comment...
Regards,
Rula
9 years 2 months ago
Raj
great fun indeed. I am not sure if you can post two submission. Why don't you choose the one you're more happy with?
raj
9 years 2 months ago
Hehehe Rula...I am posting
Hehehe Rula...I am posting these for fun only and try my hand at this form of poetry...good to know you found this funny...raj