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May 29, 2022
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THE RUNNING STREAM
Merges with the ocean
fathomed
in the deep sea
none can a fresh poem
now read
who will dive deep
to find all ole NEOS
poems
just you all must
THINK
a rare commodity poets ever ink
Lost in the oblivion of time
till you are well seated and sublime
in NEOS Chair
I never sat
so who will ever know me
Only a while thee
Gee
Cat may be
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
dear lovedly,
although I'm but a little bubble in the stream I float well and flow up to your well spring of poems. you are a poet among poets and I hope to get caught in the current.
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
wow Cats
you are no bubble
YOU ARE THE ATLANTIC
WE ARE THE ONES
gasping like fish
to breathe
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
SOMETHING WRONG STREAM
IS NOT FLOWING MOVING STUCK 9 HOURS???
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
hello Lovedly,
did you report it? if so when?
*hugs, Cat
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
it seems to be fine now.
it seems to be fine now.
*Hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
yes Cats
'tis