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s e h n s u c h t

d r e h e n

riven a glass dressed in rains
the slow dance
the damp hell vice
upon a fire soul blazing

steam and wet desire
twin of night
twin of day

twas want for both
I long for play
the perfume of
the de ja vue

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

13 years 3 months ago

Steven...

my first poem
on the new and improved...
it caught my eye, of course, your title being in a language I am so familiar with.
sehnsucht... the slow dance...
the poem rolls downwards lazily as it is read. a smooth write.
the perfume of the de ja vue, I love that line. it is the end of the poem but seems like a story which is only just beginning. a glance over ones shoulder while walking forward. I would love to see this as the first of a series of three poems.
so glad to be back...
your Proprietress

Esker

Esker

13 years 3 months ago

As if written for you Proprietress

language is beautiful
intimate for its lands
history
mystery

I am so happy to see your return
it fills my soul with a wind
that a traveller feels

Thank You
ever more

Esker!

Esker

Esker

13 years 3 months ago

you were a traveller star

Shinning in the dreamers sky
(I am not deft enough for language
nor music..but love the mystery of it)

met those that come from afar
and love the noire films and dark bands

Its so good to see you again
and that this is a home

loved

loved

13 years 3 months ago

Loved's own version

of an imaginary
pole dance
once i composed a poem
not having seen one
this twas