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s k a p a d e
the mirror was blown out
shards lay throwing the blue cold face
the clouds temptress drifting by
the ballerina standing quiet
on a jewellry box on one good hinge
the curtians parted
the lawn full of asphalt
car tops
crashes
we sped up life
drawing up the
portions caught
the black symbols
stuck to memory
like vomit
on the wall
down down
below
this ground
we covered
in its thin sheets
of drift...the ice
on puddles still
safe to hold
the river still
thinking aloud
across the quick
run
down where it ran
beneath the bridge
where all the footprints
steadied
in the silt
where the spring run
off climbed and climbed
obscuring names
and random patterns
drawn during rains
and nights spent
away
away tucked in a jacket
the heat of a fuel
crawling through the labyrnth
of its lair
a fondness in a crooked arm
and tangled hair
while the season ran out
the gulls gathering
white against the chalk blue
of grey
we remembered the kettle
steaming
the hissing of hardwood
fresh from the season
the wool blankets
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Comments
emeka ozurumba
11 years 1 month ago
very imagery packed
how do you do this, wonderful imagery and visuals
Esker
11 years 1 month ago
lots of poetry reading by others emeka..and then just working.
years of picking up this craft...reading and writing.....after awhile it becomes an intuition...
but always..the need to read more..the more words...the higher levels.....that is the ultimate
to upgrade in life...to not just be as one station.....if the mind is there to progress with and
the body is willing also...
thank you..
Ian.T
11 years 1 month ago
Steve
Like walking through an art gallery,
not only with pictures leaping off of walls,
but with sculptured objects shouting out feelings.
A great write, Yours Ian.T
Esker
11 years 1 month ago
a heap of shards
even here transition from the mind to the outer is a struggle...
in for awhile..
thank you!
lovedly
11 years 1 month ago
I read you once I read you twice
I read you once I read you twice
why lie
not ever thrice
then my mind's waves commence to float
like a sine curve of electricity
casting en-course its magnetism
and seeking all that it can draw
then only I realise
for damn sure Esker is way ahead all assure
as I stand still
holding the wind in my anchored trails
Esker in imagination
you always win
I sink
Esker
11 years 1 month ago
sync waves.......
we are impulses of power...energy transference
transformed
what we are
reality and realism
abstractions
and absurd...
Thank You Loved!
emeka ozurumba
11 years ago
loved wonderful glossary
loved wonderful glossary behind the back pass, if you play nba 2k14 on playstation three
Lonnie
11 years ago
Hey Steven,
A magical, visual escapade this, and chocked full of the images that only you can conjure! My hat is off once again to your poetic fluency!
Esker
11 years ago
more reality magic acts....
gotta get my ass across city to dog.......sounds interesting....
raj
11 years ago
Steven
I often find that your poetry moves in two levels, this was no exception.
Regards,