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Oct 20, 2019
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Safe From My Being
getting to the matter of fact
through an embrace with perks
beneath the shelter of her smile
shine your light on...on,
we let one shine
or to fly...
seek to love a verse will rise
safe from my being
to care for a riddle
seek vast for shelter
love to linger
explorer the horizon
let go with the flow
keep it before the ploy
a kiss for a girl & boy
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow 42
5 years 7 months ago
Medes
Whoops, this in its simplicity lost me in the understanding way.
I couldn't seem to follow a story,
Maybe I am getting old lol.
Please could you just drop me a line on this one as I is lost,
Yours Ian ..