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Nov 09, 2016
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Ambition denied
As Lady Macbeth belied
Cresting legal tide
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
jane210660
8 years 8 months ago
Poignant - relevant -
Poignant - relevant - condensed
all spring to my mind.
Jx
OriginalRhyku
8 years 8 months ago
Jane210660
I appreciate your review - I am glad that my Rhyku resonates with those reading it. Most of my Rhykus are based on what I hear on the news or what I observe during the day and I try to make them relevant and resonate. Thanks.
jane210660
8 years 8 months ago
Very relevant
They are very relevant and never cease to amaze me as to how much you seem to convey in such a short form. That you manage to inject irony or humour in is even more astounding.
Jx
OriginalRhyku
8 years 8 months ago
Jane210660
Overwhelmed by your overly generous review of my pedestrian poetry.
But I need the positive reinforcement so I will simply say thanks.
Esker
8 years 8 months ago
hear no the bells duncan thou they summon U to heaven or hell!
"Out Out Vile Spot!!"
he was a poet..producer..
he knew the street people
and the high class...
hmm..I relate.
and the actors for we all
live in our little and grandiose
worlds making our way...
Excellent poem!
thank U!
OriginalRhyku
8 years 8 months ago
Esker
Your pertinent quotes with your usual and unique insights - much appreciated.