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c lynn brooks
Aug 30, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sanctity Of Insanity

Listen to the cacophony of thought
running rampant through a diffused mind
see the kaleidoscopic colors bleached white
by insolent actions and deed

Insanity prevails
like a wide eyed child
for here is shelter in it's bliss
while the world carries on out there
I am warm and welcome
here in the corridors of my mind

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north carolina usa, USA

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Edgar Alan Poe, ray Bradbury, John Grissom, .Alan S Jeeves James patterson,

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c lynn brooks

4 years 10 months ago

Jerry

lol see there were other things going on up there thank you kindlly

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

A great discription...

of what transpires in a insane mind. Your look seems rather authentic and I guess that if anyone would know... I loved the
blanching of colors and the cacophony of voices. It certainly seems as though that if one was assailed by such things, that they would feel particularly safe within the confines of their own mind. I really liked the line " Insanity prevails like a wild eyed child" ~ Geez.

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c lynn brooks

4 years 10 months ago

Gee

Thank you for seeing so much in this poem I never claimed to be sane lol

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 10 months ago

Hi Chrys, I think the same as

Hi Chrys, I think the same as Geez and Teddy. "Insanity prevails...". Sad and well said. We only feel safe in the confines of our minds...sometimes, IMO. All the best, Gracy

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c lynn brooks

4 years 10 months ago

Gracy

Thank you so much that is where I feel the safest as no one can mess with my thoughts