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Sand Hill

My empty school down the road
shimmered in the heat waves,
window-glare filtered through grass
not worth bothering to cut.

It won't be long before we're gone,
so let the grass weave between the split rails,
decorate the driveway canyons,
and tickle at our wrists.

Let it hide us and the cracked vinyl siding,
bleached with RoundUp and sun,
from the eyes of Mr. Bass Pro Shop
and his wife Susan.

Maybe the grass will grow so high
when I drive by twelve years later
I won't recognize the fresh carpet
that surrounds the new rose beds.

Only "Sand Hill School Road" at the corner
and the glimmer of my elementary school
against the orange summer sunset will assure me
that I ever lived here at all.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Alfred Noyes, T. S. Eliot, Lewis Carroll, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, William Wordsworth, William Blake, Seamus Heaney, Robert Herrick

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scribbler

7 years 8 months ago

Hi

I interpret this as being Sandy Hill school seen through the eyes of a survivor of that awful day. A good poem nonetheless.......stan

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scribbler

7 years 8 months ago

yes

I figured you'd changed the name slightly. But it may well be that I have mass shootings on my mind due to the Los Vegas tragedy

Rhiannon1010

Rhiannon1010

7 years 8 months ago

That may be.

Las Vegas was certainly a tragedy. But my poem is not related to mass shootings.

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scribbler

7 years 8 months ago

Stupid me

Now I'll need to reread this with new insight

Eumolpus

Eumolpus

7 years 8 months ago

Some thoughts

We cannot help but relate the title to sandy hook and I think you should consider that most readers will assume that even if a coincidence.
I do like the feeling of the poem and the very compelling finish. An interesting take on moving from one stage of life to another