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Oct 22, 2011
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Savor the Moment
A moment united
An awesome distinct thought,
point of view, none imagined
an idea freshly decided
initiated from creative cruxes of poetic etches
should be mounted, the next time
unveiled nuggets, shimmer in the light of your eyes
and, enhance taste, savoring the moment
About This Poem
Last Few Words: playing with rhymes and creating a new style or idea of writing
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 8 months ago
Barbara! what have yiu done?
Is it the pain, the experience? Whatever, your poetry has achieved a whole new dimension,
I love it! and find it very hard to critique
Really, your poetry has changed a lot, for the better..
Barbara Writes
13 years 8 months ago
Thanks Jess
Your rhyming workshop along with what I learning and experiencing is really what happening. Glad you like it. It shows me I am really getting better at writing poetry. And critiquing others
weirdelf
13 years 8 months ago
oops
doouble post