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Scrapbooks

I looked through old albums
after she was gone
There were so many to sort!

An enormous journey
through paper and keepsakes
A memoir of ephemera
full to bursting from within

It was the few empty pages
that followed in some that got to me,
labors of love, reminiscences
yet to be cherished

As it turned out, I didn’t mind the task
The archaeology of a mother’s time
and the stories it told
It was really no trouble at all

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

dear Michael,

you carry a soft stick, but, this is hard hitting! twisted up on the inside...

*L & H, Cat

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Scrapbooks

Hello, Michael,
Another beautiful, yet simple poem revealing such honest, tender thoughts. You are gifted.
L
I sense a little Ted Kooser, here, which I express in the most complementary way. :)

Michael Anthony

Michael Anthony

2 years 6 months ago

Thank you L! Always

Thank you L! Always appreciate you stopping by. BTW, you nailed one of my biggest influences - Kooser is amazing, and I am blushing at the comparison.

Best