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Oct 01, 2012
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In search of love
the moon shines bright
faithfully every thirty days
as some enjoy the night
wishing upon the stars
for another chance
to change the world
the ocean water ripples
carrying with its memories
of those standing on it shores
taking hold of its power
to find love infinities
where no one knows a broken heart
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
12 years 9 months ago
Lovely read dear Barbra
Especially liked your wishes in
wishing upon the stars
for another chance
to change the world
the ocean water ripples
carrying with it memories
of those standing on it shores ------> maybe on(( its ))shores
Thanks for sharing
Barbara Writes
12 years 9 months ago
Thank Rula
I miss that one . Thanks for liking and commenting