seasons

seasons
coming and going
time over time
be it cooled or warm
i like all seasons

ain't it fun
how they come and go
bringing new life every time they come around
making new changes
time over time

i like all seasons
be it windy or sunny
sometimes i long for other one's to come
time over time
i know they will come around again...

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Comments

chrix

13 years ago

its all about seasons

Candlewitch

13 years ago

hello,

interesting persona. take on the seasons. welcome to neopoet!

always, Cat

Ian.T

13 years ago

Duplicate

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Ian.T

13 years ago

Chrix

Welcome to Neopoet and we look forward to seeing more of your work and you joining in some of the workshops..
Have a look at Barbara's Renga and join in the fun..
I liked this just a play on the seasons, and a few words, but good all the same, Yours Ian.T

wesley snow

13 years ago

I also welcome you to NeoPoet.

I will hold comment until we've had a chance to find out what you want to accomplish (for we all come here with goals in mind... not merely to share).
Don't wait too long to post again.
wesley