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Geremia
Geremia
Oct 11, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SEE NO EVIL--updated

SEE NO EVIL

Down through corridors of yellow lights
walls stained by Death’s stench
into a soulless dark I fell

and from behind the curtains forward came
the French I knew call my name

aged beauty mummified
eyes of clear grey glass
figure long ,slender and tall
did to me speak...
and I did fear…

Christ have Mercy
on us all

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raj

13 years 9 months ago

Dear Joe

i can appreciate what you have said...being home is always homely...

take care..be well..

M

magics02

13 years 9 months ago

See no evil

Hear no evil
Do no evil

and evil finds you eh? I am glad to see you up and about my love. I hear you also about the hospital been there with that one. I hope all is getting better day by day for you Joe. I am with you in prayer and thought.

Always friend

Ms Mona

Hugs

M

magics02

13 years 9 months ago

Me too Joe

You just take it easy and not be on here so much:) It too can make one weak:) Smiles be well got to go to appt also this am. Love to you much xooxo hugs sis

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

13 years 9 months ago

ghostly personages haunting your moments,

I feel this is a comment on your recent demise,
corridors of the hospital flickering through your mind
awakening memories and thoughts
that you would rather hide from yourself;
those dreaded stenches and ghostly personages
haunting your moments,
partnering the pain you waltz with in your everyday troubles,
and at the same time
creating a fairy tale atmosphere of unreality
with its veils layered in our line of vision.

Evocative magical and poignant these words my Joe.

Anni.

M

magics02

13 years 9 months ago

Joe

I do not feel you torment these visions. In my own opinion it is your write, your feelings, sometimes misconstrued to the reader and sometimes spot on. I have shared those exact thoughts and feelings my own self and not of self pity either. It is what it is no matter how you slice it. I am happy to see you up and around a bit. Take it slow and know I care

love you friend
Mona