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crypticbard
crypticbard
Apr 18, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

see you there

Scattered like stars
thoughts glimmer:
constellations of ideas
mosaics of the mind's workings.

Words twist and turn
a labyrinth of meaning
each line reflects
each stanza holds a riddle

Neon lights and ancient shadows
merge in a collision of epochs
their spirit breathes through the chaos,
a tapestry woven from tradition and innovation.

A chorus emerges, blending the visible and the hidden.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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neopoet

neopoet

2 months 3 weeks ago

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "see you there" effectively captures the complexity and depth of human thought and creativity. The imagery of thoughts as scattered stars and a labyrinth of meaning is vivid and engaging. The juxtaposition of neon lights with ancient shadows creates a sense of timelessness and continuity. The idea of a chorus blending the visible and hidden aspects adds a layer of mystery and unity to the poem. Overall, the poem successfully conveys the intricate nature of ideas and the interplay between tradition and innovation.

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Rula

Rula

2 months 3 weeks ago

Congrats on writing

such an amazing poem
Especially like the use of imagery and the extended metaphor.
The opening stanza draw me in and I'm never disappointed.
Well done
Thank you for sharing

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 months 3 weeks ago

hello c.b.

This was a sensational write/read! Very stimulating, better than coffee! my favorite lines are:

a tapestry woven from tradition and innovation.

A chorus emerges, blending the visible and the hidden.

this poem has a futuristic flavor, which I adore! Thank you for taking me there!

fondly, Cat