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lou
lou

Seeking (adult content)

Tongue traveling down your spine
Searching for the source
Mouths moist with pleasure
seeking one another

Suction 
Finger tips explore
Regions of privacy
Previously unknown 

Stroking 
Slipping in between
Salty fresh thighs
Making a connection

Two entities melding
Sensation untamed 
Lifting off into orbit
Explosive reaction

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 8 months ago

Wow!

HOT!

Two entities melding
Sensation untamed
Lifting off into orbit
Explosive reaction

always, Cat

lou

lou

13 years 8 months ago

Cat

you know I'm hot stuff

Lmao

Lou