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lou
lou
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing With Emotions

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Seepage - Final writing with emotion poem

Makes me want to rip heads off.
Bullshit, verbal leakage
you are putrid seepage,
dripping down my brain.

Glacial sweat creeping down the back of my neck
trickling through my senses
feel the need to massacre ,
as I am , lying in this metaphorical gutter.

Tiny bites nip at my
self control. Testing my durability .
Laying me low.
The crux of it all.

Your are woven into every fibre.
Being without you devastating ,
Evaporating , driving me insane.
Lost amongst the fag butts and the debauchery
wallowing in my melancholy.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Dear Lou,

Most excellent work! Much better than mine, you silly girl! (and yours makes sense, too!)

always, Cat

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Cat

thank you.

Aww don't tell me off , (bottom lip quiver) LOL!!

Lou

R

raj

13 years 9 months ago

Lou..

gut wrenching sensations emit out of your poem i believe just the way you wished to emote ....well done ..it is very effective...

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Chyrs

You are welcome

Your workshops are always well planned and fun.

Lou

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

LOL!!

"You wouldn't like me when i'm angry ," as 'The Hulk,' would say LMAO!!

Lou