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Clentin

Jan 13, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Self Examination

We, like mushrooms of the
Field, develop strong fiber
With the light of dawn
Fortified by hopeful rays
Of the new day’s sun
Staunch enough to endure
The biting of teeth chewing
At its tender stem
Yet too fragile to bear
The weight of night’s awesome
Boot.

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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2 years 5 months ago

hello Clentin,

very interesting. I would like to read more.

*hugs, Cat

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you.

Thank you.
I am trying to write more. I hope to create some more poems.

2 years 5 months ago

I think that with age one

I think that with age one looks over the past while anticipating the future. Hoping to improve as time moves on.

2 years 5 months ago

dear Clentin,

i think that is a very good outlook on things. good luck,

*hugs, Cat