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Jan 08, 2019
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Selfies are free
young gals and guys
taking selfies
together or alone
coz who knows
who will be the new pair
and so another selfie
with a fresher one
will take care
digitize all snaps and time
we have to be slaves
all our lives
now of selfies
O man
be a selfies kinda fan
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
6 years 6 months ago
This....
has to be one of your better little poems! I feel the current flowing and watch my friends and family preen before the camera! It's almost electric! ME ! Me! Me ! I started this decade calling this generation, The ME generation. Not necessarily a bad thing: hell yes, let everybody know where you are at and what is your thing. I like the not so subtle way of you reminding the reader that we are slaves enough to our daily lives as it is. Nice! ~ Geezer.
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Eumolpus
6 years 6 months ago
A suggestion
young gals & dudes
takin selfies
together or alone
coz who knows
who will b the new pair
& so another selfie
with a fresher one
will take care
digitize snaps & time
we have to be slaves
all our lives
O family of man
be a selfies kinda fan
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
simply beautiful Eumolpus
may we call you
Neoplus
none dare fuss