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mand

Aug 16, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sensual

Sparkling wine;
ruby red fine.
The sunsets, two silhouettes,
moving into the power of love.

No pretenses
waking senses.
Desire, boom on fire,
sinking into the light of your eyes.

Sensual clicks,
exhaling mix.
Body flow, let myself go,
melting into the texture of you.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: GBR

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Comments

11 years 11 months ago

ALL ABOUT GIVING ONE SELF

for a lovely orgasmic intercourse
but of course
clothed in wild thoughts

11 years 11 months ago

It's all in the imagination!

It's all in the imagination!

He he

Thanks for coming by to read, drool and comment. Lol

Love Mand xxxxxx

S

11 years 11 months ago

Mandy

Pant, pant.........will return after a cold shower lol...........stan

11 years 11 months ago

did u shower

to enjoy the cool of a fellow poet's imagination

a poetry is one which germinates
into different directions..
this time of thoughts
not fascinations

11 years 11 months ago

Ha ha

Watch out Susan!

11 years 11 months ago

Mand

I guess the girls in Wales are hot now that Digit has been there lol.
Jogged my memory about forest fires and barbies can't remember why, Yours Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

You'll have to send Digit

You'll have to send Digit here again! Lol - trouble is they'll be hot ( possibly charred ) for a different reason. Lol

He he