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May 02, 2014
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Sentimental....... Inspired by Ian
Upon the broadened wings of sentimentality
We hope to ride free,
to enter newer vistas hopefully…
where we shall confront happiness, may be.
Such a vision only those can see
who abide in their massive belief,
that life exists beyond this earthly sojourn,
into the far reaching realms yet unknown
but some still believe they exist.
Let them bask in the glory of hope
someday they may meet
it may be brief
but as we discover distant stars
such imagination is neither wild nor far
perhaps I may be the misleading star
Albeit
I hope not!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
11 years 2 months ago
Loved
I liked this one, runs smoothly on tongue and the message is very clear and forthright...
Regards,
loved
11 years 2 months ago
so very kind of you
to say such words of appreciation
it swells my heart
thanks raj
emeka ozurumba
11 years 2 months ago
i always enjoy your poems as
i always enjoy your poems as honey to bud
loved
11 years 2 months ago
and I so much enjoy your encouragement
from worse to betterment
thanks
alidzain
11 years 1 month ago
loved this one
everything about it is wonderful.
Alid
loved
11 years 1 month ago
grateful
just grateful
Ian.T
11 years 1 month ago
Loved
At last words inspired by me, so you say, yet not perfect, lol
Glad to see others liked your write, take care young Bard,
Yours Ian .T
PS:- Sentimentality originally indicated the reliance on feelings as a guide to truth.
But current usage defines it as an appeal to shallow, uncomplicated emotions at the expense of reason.
May be the later is the words meaning that Jess was on about the other day, take care..