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Aug 31, 2017
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Senyru Life
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me. (Ian)
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
7 years 10 months ago
Dear Barbara
Just an additive to your Senyru, hope this keeps the flow into places only dreamed of, yours as always Ian..xx
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Barbara Writes
7 years 10 months ago
Thanks beautiful addition
Just what I would add to make it a Tanka
Unconditional love to you.
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
Im loving this
Dooreen Cash
7 years 10 months ago
To You Barbara
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free
Barbara Writes
7 years 10 months ago
Thanks Dooreen
You got the navigating down here
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
Sparrow
7 years 10 months ago
Barbara
Maybe an addition am not sure..
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me.
Yours as always Ian..xx
Barbara Writes
7 years 10 months ago
Nice
You got the navigating down here
It's been a long road
Wrangling earth challenges
Time to spread my wings. (Barbara)
To wander in places new,
I will keep looking for you. (Ian)
Angels everywhere
Guard my path of consciousness
A more perfect earth (Barbara)
and in your light, I am me
let my heart and soul be free (Dooreen)
There in a moment
Entangled, yet both are free
You, you, and me, me. (Ian)