SHARD OF THE YARD

Inspector Shard
of Scotland Yard:
My god he's sharp,
by heavens, he's hard.

Solving crime before it's committed,
given the time, weather permitted.

Inspector Shard.
Always on guard.
Next time I see him
I'll get you his card.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Bourne End, Bucks

Comments

Geezer

2 years 9 months ago

I'm not seeing...

a reason for the request of using care, as it is a work of sensitivity for you. But if you say so...
I liked it much, a good little ditty that set the blood racing as though there is a mystery to be solved. ~ Geezer.
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Rula

2 years 9 months ago

Hello

Welcome to Neopoet. Nothing like a read that puts a smile on a face. Yours did this I thought this little ditty is a great first submission.
Keep them coming
Enjoy your time with us here
Welcome again.

Candlewitch

2 years 9 months ago

hello, nice to meet you,

welcome to Neopoet! I much enjoyed your clever piece. I have no suggestions.

*hugs, Cat