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SHED NOT

Shed not tears
He is there to invite you
His palace is overwhelming with glee and peace
Come and enjoy in his hands
Fear not
Life is great and enormous
There are a lot of ways and means to travel
Just come forward to reach the peak

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Geezer

Geezer

13 years 8 months ago

I do believe...

that I got the idea of this one in one try. I think you are trying to say that there are many different ways to God. It is short and to the point and yet mystical too. That's my take anyways. ~ Geezer