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Depressed 1
Depressed 1
Nov 18, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Euphonious English Workshop Part #2

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Short

Life comes, and then quickly, it is gone

All in all, it does not last all that very long

In just one day, you can live a lifetime

Either trapped outside or inside your mind

Turn around it is gone before you even know

The longer time passes, the shorter it grows

Anyway, you look at life, it is just ephemeral

Couldn't get through it without my Demerol

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southwest United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Jim Morrison, Sylvia Plath

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Comments

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 7 months ago

Well done

Excellent use of the word and conveying its meaning throughout your poem. The line "in just one day, you can live a lifetime" stood out to me. Great job.

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Glad to see...

you are making it through the struggles. Your work gets better all the time. Keep on keeping on! ~ Geez.
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