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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jan 08, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Showers of Love

Flowers feed on the rain
and I lean on your name
sunshine warm the earth
my heart burning with thirst

Twilight dances with the moon
and I wanna dance with you
rainbows form in my heart
my heart rain from the start

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

14 years 6 months ago

Hi

if you have a third stanza to share let me see it.

R

raj

14 years 6 months ago

Dear Barbara

a very nice comparison of feelings of love with the moods of nature...

warmly..

S

scribbler

14 years 6 months ago

showers

as usual you are able to get to the heart of the matter in a compact write. And as usual the nitpicker is gonna point out typos lol:
l-1 drop the S in feeds
l-7 drop the S in forms
I'll bet you wish I'd leave your stuff alone.....................scribbler