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Jan 02, 2011
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Shut Up Sometime
Shut Up Sometime
Some people talk too much
never shut up
and never listen
Words like rain continue to fall from their lips
a door that can't be closed
and a wooden idol that can't be heard
Shut up sometime
make the world a better place
and stop tuning out knowledge
Listen to the words of your love
shut your trap
and free the peace
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Was feeling a bit irritated trying to talk to someone who see the need to explain everything and acknowledge nothing as if I'm stupid a something when i wrote this piece. lol
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
14 years 6 months ago
Jayne
Thanks, I am glad you like. I have learn over the years to just shut up and free the peace, but some people just keep on talking, bottle up peace, and free wrath instead. Lol
Barbara Writes
14 years 6 months ago
Kudos
I too find peace in silence.
Big smile back at ya Bjp