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Sep 28, 2018
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Shy Jeremiah
A frog
Is like a dog
It’s got a body
That goes potty
But it won’t shout
For you to take it out
Will only croak
After a tennis shoe poke
Fertilize your garden
“I beg your pardon”
A bit more privacy
Than unblushing Daisy
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Shadowdancer3349
6 years 9 months ago
Greg
one word amusing
Geezer
6 years 9 months ago
Yesssss...
Funny!