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May 31, 2025
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This side ...this side..this side....
We have a girl child,this side
Who killed herself,this side
Because bullies,this side
Posted her nudies online,this side
Her family is still crying,this side
The loss of life,this side
For a few laughs, this side
Why the brutality,this side?
When did we lose our humanity,this side?
About This Poem
Last Few Words: New article came out about the latest victim of cyber bullying. Breaks my heart.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
3 weeks 3 days ago
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Leslie
3 weeks 3 days ago
Koqwue
I feel the anger and desperation. I don't understand why AI won't make a comment. Keep putting your feelings on the website. It's good for everyone here at Neo!
kowque
3 weeks 3 days ago
Im too angry these days
Im going to post something nice soon.
Thank for taking the time to always be kind
Lavender
3 weeks 3 days ago
This Side
Hello, Koki,
You've said so much with this. Sometimes, poetry should be angry...
Thank you,
Lx
kowque
3 weeks 2 days ago
Lol im serious....im going to post something nice
Not sure when,but it will be as beautiful as the Lavender in my garden. That stays a persistent colour despite the fact that its cold here and we dont have water ;)
Lavender
3 weeks 2 days ago
I look forward...
to reading!
L
Candlewitch
2 weeks 6 days ago
this side...
sweet koki,
keep on writing keep on venting your feelings. we will be here to read your words!
(I would be angry too!)
xxx Cat
kowque
2 weeks 6 days ago
My fellow sweet Cat Lady
Thank you for stopping by.
Unca Fez
2 weeks 2 days ago
Having Been...
Having been the victim of bullying before there was a cyber, I can see how social media can amplify the intensity and devestation. Children can be so cruel and, unfortunately, that cruelty carries over into adulthood, especially on social media. I don't know if our society can ever recover. Perhaps with some people writing about it and calling it what it is, maybe we can save ourselves.
Steve
kowque
2 weeks 1 day ago
I was also bullied before social media
But, then experienced a situation where my ex-husband threatened to post intimate photos of me online. I immediately contcated a lawyer and he was sent a very stern "cease and desist" letter. I was fortunate to have been able to stand up for myself BEFORE anything happened. But, this poem reads so angry because I literally had a panic attack for what felt like the longest moment of that day. Thank you for the comment Steve.