SILENCE.... THE ANGELS OF PEACE ARE PASSING BY

SILENCE.... THE ANGELS OF PEACE ARE PASSING BY
AMEN ..

Peace comes from within

Peace comes from within
seeing the surfs
rise and fall

a distant ship
far in the horizon
rises tall
then calms your
DOWN UNDER
nerves
waves bring calm and peace

not writing on the sand at all
twill be washed
ere you into the waters fall

calm down
peace comes from within
let’s now begin

Searching peace
from within!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

scribbler

9 years 11 months ago

Hi loved

There are people who undergo hell yet are a peace and there are others whose lives are golden who can't seem to find contentment. Thus the finding of peace IS an inner thing, not something which can be imposed by another. Liked your poem.........stan

lovedly

9 years 11 months ago

thankx

Stan ur power of words
strengthens my inners
guts

Sparrow

9 years 11 months ago

Loved

Strangely a good write and a hard theme to put across, this you did well.
It would be nice if it was pointed at someone or something, you mentioned the Aussies but nothing to nail it down maybe it needs finishing.
Take care and know we are there,
Yours Ian..