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Sep 21, 2022
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A silent seed
A subtly
silent seed
blatantly
begins to bleed
out it’s
neurotic
numbing need .
To passionately
plunge through
the persistent
pounding palms
of pressure
and proceed
to succeed .
Gradually growing
into the grimy
grasps of greed.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
2 years 9 months ago
Great meter
nicely done!
Edward nigma
2 years 9 months ago
Thank you
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/0_pKRMptrFI
large marge
2 years 9 months ago
Goor rhythm
I really like the rhythm of this. I imagine myself as the seed and that the preassures are lessons.