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Silently Into The Loving Night

Silently into the night
into the silence of the chilly fright
with softest music did they us delight
a distant note on a lively accordion
followed by a reverberation on a violin

silently into the eerie night

sounds of soft musical lovely quotes
to our ears were like soothing anecdotes
sounds of soft musical lovely notes
to our ears were like smoothing anecdotes.

silently into the night they strung
whistling by then had suddenly sprung
blowing clarinets from distant sand dunes
were like variable softly played lullaby tunes.

silently yeah yeah into the moistened night

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

5 years 2 months ago

Silently...

Hello, Lovedly,
Feels somewhat like a song? Very descriptive and delightful, but with all the musical references, does not seem too silent. Perhaps softly?
Thank you!
L

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 2 months ago

yes this is a true occurrence at midnight

when we all had only TRANSISTORS
DO you know ?
And
I heard drummers guys enjoying perhaps somewhere in Miami beach
millions of miles away

I composed my poem
became a song
Glad you liked it

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 2 months ago

Hmmmm...

Yeah, yeah? Sounds like the British invasion, if you ask me. Nice music lovedly. ~ Geezer.
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