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May 25, 2018
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Silvery Raindrops
Dark clouds
Strong winds
Before the rain falls.
I sit upon my threshold
On a comfy pillow
So my boney butt won’t hurt.
Underneath cool silvery raindrops
Trees sway in high winds
As grey skies cast over me.
My knees are soaked
My feet are grounded
Rests on steps made of cinder blocks.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 1 month ago
Hi Barbara
Lovely verses pour from your pen like the crystal clear raindrops...so many good lines in your poem...keep them pouring...
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Barbara Writes
7 years 1 month ago
Thanks raj
It’s raining everyday here for a few minutes as I sit outside soaking up the suns energy. I get inspired to write a poem as I listen to the rain coming in like a freight train of wind
raj
7 years 1 month ago
freight train of wind loaded
freight train of wind loaded with muses? :)
raj
7 years 1 month ago
What do you think Barbara
is it time to start a Renga on the theme of rain / raindrops?....It has been time since you indulged in a Renga...just a thought to tickle your mind..it is only fair that I start with one
Each droplet of rain
a mercenary of life
gods send from the skies
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Barbara Writes
7 years 1 month ago
Yes great idea
I’ll get on. Would you like to do a blog introducing it. I create the syllabus
raj
7 years 1 month ago
I will be a participant
I will be a participant
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