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Apr 07, 2022
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SIMILAR EPISODE COINCIDENCE
I was then nearly
19 she maybe like fifty
with a low down hubby
she clenched me under her arms
but excited though I was
couldn't come under her charms
but surprisingly
I still feel warm
though she has merged
since mighty long
how to me
that memory does still belong
now
still I wish
it will last long
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear lovedly,
maybe the memory would stay with you longer if you write it down, maybe in a personal diary?
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Cats thankx
my memory is very good I remember all vital incidents of life