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Apr 22, 2018
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A Simple Read
While folding the pages
of the life's book
page after page
in search of happiness
between the lines,
a period or a comma
might hinder the journey,
don't stop though,
the book's still open
your epitaph isn't written yet.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Clichéd?
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
raj
7 years 2 months ago
Hi Rula
A simple philosophy very aptly expressed / explained by you in this crisp gem of a poem .....a great reflection...
warmly...
Rula
7 years 2 months ago
Wow raj
that was so quick. So happy to know it appeals to you dear friend.
Really appreciate it.
Thank you!
raj
7 years 2 months ago
Not me Rula...i need to thank
Not me Rula...i need to thank you for giving me the pleasure of a read...I believe this has a potential of converting into Sunku form because with such simplicity and in few words your message in the poem hits home....
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Rula
7 years 2 months ago
I'd very much
wish to have your sunku virsion and share it here with me dear raj.