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Simply gifted
Simply gifted…
What gift would you give,
a man hungering to a death.
Would food be enough,
as he finally sucks breath.
And after its given,
proudly you’d stand tall.
Or can you consider,
that its not a gift at all.
To wet the lips of a child,
who’s dying of thirst.
May salve your conscience,
but you wont be the first.
Does that water wash
a single stain of guilt.
Truly we must avoid,
defence, so tardily built.
We know simple condemnation,
wont stop the killing, or rape.
Calling them the crimes of animals,
gifted words we use to shape
I believe the gift to give,
is best given to the strong.
If they could feel as victims,
they’d end it, knowing, wrong.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: We're so guilty at giving the wrong gifts.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kailashana2
14 years 5 months ago
Assuage guilt. Most of us
Assuage guilt. Most of us live for that, that's exactly why nothing changes but our moments of guilt. Good subject, rarely given its just due.
~A
Roscoe Lane
14 years 5 months ago
Forgive me,
Forgive me, i have just read these comments, and i say thank you,.. Regards Roascoee
Roscoe Lane
14 years 5 months ago
Thank you,
Thank you, and sorry for this late reply. Love Roscoe...