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Nov 20, 2015
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To Sir with Love Dear Jess
To Sir with Love
By Lovedly
I really miss you so,
What a poet
would ever I have been
Jess
if you had been so kind
not to kick me
The deserving get the salutations
and
you are Jess
above all my hearts palpitations
without your kicks on my behind
I would have been lost
and
just left far behind
in this vast ocean
I call time
not without
any reason or rhyme...
Jess you are a man so refine
you can alone determine
a diamond
out of a god forsaken mine
those who know like me only
I bow to thee......>>>>
and now once again
you may kick me
for not saying ye
with love from
Lovedly
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
9 years 7 months ago
Nice tribute...
to one who would always let you know where you are and where you should be. Nice work, lovedly.
~ Gee
lovedly
9 years 7 months ago
thanks
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