Hooded Stranger

Oct 16, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sit

You’ve said your piece and I don’t agree
Your facts are wrong but you won’t care
Looking at me with that sinister stare

I’ve listened to your lies so let me speak
I’ve the answers you don’t want to hear
Seen this before, I await your false tear

Sit down
Shut up
And close that fucking mouth

Sit down
Shut up
And close your fucking mouth

My truth has been told and you don’t care
My facts are right and you won’t agree
It’s in front of your eyes but you refuse to see

You’ve listened to me but you have no response
Your judgement is clouded you blinkered fool
With your wounded pride, you’re left to crawl

Get up
Fuck off
And shut that fucking mouth

Get up
Fuck off
And shut your fucking mouth

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West England, GBR

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath (poet), Caitlin Mattison/Eddy Styx (poet 'candlewitch'), Enda Collins (poet 'ziggy'), Martin Gore (lyricist for Depeche Mode), Neil Tennant (lyricist for Pet Shop Boys), Stefan Großmann (lyricist for Absurd Minds), Lemmy Kilmister (lyricist for Motörhead), Nathan Reiner (lyricist for Third Realm), Wayne Hussey (lyricist for The Mission), Leonard Cohen (lyricist), Tom Shear (lyricist for Assemblage 23), Clint Carney (lyricist for System Syn & Fake), Ronan Harris (lyricist for VNV Nation), Aaron Lewis (lyricist for Staind), Jason Charles Miller (lyricist for Godhead), Torben Wendt (lyricist for Diorama), Adrian Hates (lyricist for Diary Of Dreams)

Comments

Candlewitch

14 years ago

Dear Dan,

This is a fantastic song. You nailed it. You have said what I couldn't. Death to scheming witches (bitches?) Every word is a treasure. Love the venom reflected back at the source here!

Love, cat

Hooded Stranger

14 years ago

Cat

Cat,

needed a new angrier track with a hard and fast beat. This is to be a fast song so it may need more stanza's or a longer chorus line.

It is in demo form right now, but I am pleased with the key changes and atmosphere of it so far.

Not sure if you know the band "Combichrist"...but that is the kind of sound I am looking at.:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRa3BU5bl-s

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26AK2BgnDt0&feature=related

regards,

lou

14 years ago

Dan

I have commented on this else where as you know. Just wanna say i love it.

lou

Hooded Stranger

14 years ago

Lou

Lou,

thanks mate,

magics02

14 years ago

Wowo

I hope you felt better after this one and I have to say I have to agree with the curse going in notes and all:) I have had this similiar feeling just lately for some reason it must be something in that water over there.

You’ve said your piece and I don’t agree
Your facts are wrong but you won’t care
Looking at me with that sinister stare

I so agree and hope this is not directed at anyone in particular here..and if so I guess that is right also

Hooded Stranger

14 years ago

Mona

Mona,

nope this isn't directed at anybody at Neopoet...just an angry write that needed to do for a song/album.

I don't feel better because it wasn't designed to be a vent at anybody. I felt fine writing it and feel the same now it is finished. I am looking forward to recording it though...I have some ideas.

Actually I may send this to my ex...she'll love it!...not!

regards,