brittle light

May 12, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Skallywags

pandemonium and fisticuffs

t'was a flabbergasting, and
discombobulating brouhaha over
what the funniest word was!

pooh-poohing
such ridiculousness,
I guffawed at them all.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

9 years 2 months ago

there was a dissemination of wordy statements brought to the arena.
Whereupon, there was vigorous dissention. Cool!
~Gee

9 years 2 months ago

9 years 2 months ago

It is worth thinking on, when drunk.
discombobulation ranks

9 years 2 months ago

ratbag
simple and full of meaning.

9 years 2 months ago

ratbagy blues would be the funniest song.

I was only interested in the aural aspect of words for this piece (obviously subjective)

regards,

9 years 2 months ago

concept and imaginative execution. I enjoyed very much.

9 years 2 months ago

I value your critiques. You seem to 'get' it all; the gestalt, form and function, logic, etc; things others don't touch on

I appreciate your takes and opinions.

9 years 2 months ago

It just rolls off the tongue
love guffawing myself

Enjoyed
Love judy
xxx