Slippery Slope

On the Crystal slide
anyone can ride
if your calloused enough
for the lines that follow

I'll never get my fill
and can taste it still
one look inside
other girls forgotten

Yum Yum sweet Crystal's sex
that overly addictive sticky mess
her fine red hair and creamy skin
watch out boys, my turn again

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Comments

themoonman

13 years 12 months ago

Hiya Chrys ...

We are all doing ok, hope all is well there too.

yes, this has that juvenile side I can't seem to shake from ...
and hope I never do.

thanks

Bonitaj

14 years ago

Hey there Old Boy (said in a Cambridge accent;)

Sorry I came late to this one. Drawn in by Philosophical Nature of the title. You didn't disappoint!
Isn't temptation, particularly of the carnal variety, nearly always a slippery slope?
Nicely captured!
Boni

themoonman

13 years 12 months ago

Carnal desires ...

we all have them, and they are never as simple as just satisfying
the urge, it always returns, until it doesn't, by then, I hope to be dead.

loved

14 years ago

you are undoubtedly wonderful

if only i had followed you
on my part ,
its been blunderful

My Honour
It’s a signal honour,
Whenever you visit my leaf,
It helps me turn,
A new leaf,
In my life
Its my belief..

themoonman

13 years 12 months ago

Loved ...

our leaves are intertwined, whether we want it or not.

loved

13 years 12 months ago

pardon my ignorance for not being able to

evaluate your find
intertwined....
and
do wish to you remind,
you are foremost
in my mind ,
as i inacted with you initially
the most
on Neopoet ,
you are my best
first and foremost
host,....